GAH! i forgot to comment last time.
waves hai!! =]
duuude. i actually love this story. youre a really awesome writer too.
another thing youve got going on here is the way that youve shown the order. its hard to find elsewhere, 'cause theyre all a bunch of dumbledore-worshipping parrots, but its refreshing to see a new perspective. its an old storyline, but done by a very good writer.
congrats. =]