I agree i loved it too. The way you write them teasing each other is so funny and i love the way Frank responds. I agree with Moonshyne the conversation between Ray and Bob was really good. I can't wait to read more.
Author's response
thank you for your review and i'm so pleased you liked the update. I'm so happy.
I messed up when i posted the chapter as i missed out letters, words and said Gerard leaned back his bed (he was in a car at the time) instead of his head. Dumb