Review for Elementary Calculations

Elementary Calculations

(#) BellaxAngel 2008-07-29

I recently found your story and read it, and I must say, I love how Harry isn't all (for lack of a better word)good like he is in the books.

I personally like the fact he, like someone commented before,is a realist, has a bit of a sociopathic personality, and is intelligent and logical. Also, the fact that your story isn't cliche unlike a few other stories I've read is a big plus. Anyway, on to other things.

I dislike Dumbledore, mainly because of the fact that he manipulated a few things to 'force' Harry into attending Hogwarts. I especially like the way you write Dumbledore because:
1. He was wrong about Harry.
2. He's a bit naive.

At first, I thought Harry was going to be put in Slytherin, but after hearing Harry's logic, being put into Ravenclaw does make more sense.

Anyway, before I start rambling, overall, I love your story, my favorite parts being the talks with Voldemort.

I can't wait to read what ahppens with Remus.