I loved the start, and it's turned me onto that excellent series of omakes that technically belong to Rors. Hopefully after the first few chapters time will move rather quickly, but really any way you write this story will be great. I only hope you find the time and energy to keep it going!
Looking forward to more.
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Thank you!
Glad to've turned you on to Rors' fics--they're great fun. I particularly like his Evangelion fic "Chicks Dig Giant Robots."
I hope I can find the time and energy as well. I've got the first scene of the next chapter--we'll see how it goes from there.