Wow The start is Awesome and the Plot seems very Nice ..... only Thing you should do is to add the Translation for the French Language that is Spoken in this Fanfiction and please update soon.
Cheers
Haroon
Author's response
Thank you much!
Sorry, I did forget to put in translations. I have a bad habit of assuming that if I can understand the French, anyone can, as mine is fairly well rusty beyond recognition. ;-)
"Je suis Hermione Granger. Et... je pense que vous êtes vraiment belle."
"I'm Hermione Granger. And... I think you (formal) are truly beautiful."
"Ah, chère petite 'Ermione... il faut me tutoyer, chérie.
"Oh, dear little Hermione... thou must thou me, darling."
(It's a very simple phrase, but very difficult to translate into contemporary Standard English. Fleur's telling Hermione that she should use the familiar form, not the formal, to her.)
I'll try to update soon--have got the first scene of the next chapter written.