Great start to the story mate, lol - oh Haman Harkness, thinking that Hermione was a selkie... but it looks like that Hermione is part selkie, cool. I like Hermione thoughts about being a Pet.
I like it how Harry got Fleur and Hermione. LoL - oh Luna, the cuazy girl, on her free will she wanted to be sold to Harry, you got to love her. She wants to be a good Pet too, and want to call Harry Master... I hope that Harry will get use to that soon.
Are you going to have Harry become rush??
I hope that you'll make this story in a NC17, as I would like to see some smut in here. :P
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Thank you!
Aye, Hermione's part selkie. Not very much, about a sixteenth or so, but part all the same.
Harry will get used to Luna, eventually. At least to the degree that such a thing is possible. ;-) He'll certainly learn to accept that letting her call him "Master" and behave as she thinks a pet should (within limits) is the kindest way to treat her.
Are you going to have Harry become rush??
Sorry, but I've no idea as to who or what "rush" is.
I hope that you'll make this story in a NC17, as I would like to see some smut in here. :P
Well, eventually there will be sex, of course. I'm not saying I'll write it, as I'm not much for writing NC17, but their relationship will be consummated.
But it's going to be a while. Luna's only ten years of age, and Fleur's the eldest at thirteen. They're going to become physically comfortable with each other rather quickly, but it's going to be a few years (of their time) before very much beyond kissing, cuddling, and sleeping happens in their bed.