hell to the fucking yeah! oh how i have missed you! i go on vacation and when i come home i have a awesome chapter waiting for me. thank god your back. do you know what i've been reduced to reading? do you? huh?
favorite line: "Shut the fuck up. That means ‘zip it’ in English."
and yes i'm very much aware how annoying i am by quoting your own story back to you.
i love this lovey-dovey stuff but i want some drama.
hopefully you feel enlightened on your church camp thingy to write more. now i feel guilty for swearing in my review after remembering you are at a church retreat.
Author's response
Well I'm glad you had something to come home to! Truth be told, I missed your reviews--you're my favorite reviewer. I just had a really, reeeeeally long dry spell; SORRY!
AHAHA! I love that line, I went back and reread everything, and that may be my favorite, besides the one about being violated with a drumstick.
Dude, I'm all for the romance too, but I feels ya--the story needs more than fluff. Read the new chapter, it's starting to get somewhere I think.
And thank you for reviewing! Yay! I love reviews! They motivate me!