I like it so far. Zach kinda reminds me of May from Pokemon Champions, I think was the season. Not a bad thing, mind--I'm personally sick of trainers who are instinctively the best evar so there!
Anyway, like the characters and the premise so far. On to chapter 2!
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I only watched a few of those episodes myself, so it's proof I wasn't trying to copy her in a male essence! XD Anyways, thank you. ^^