If I could make a suggestion... Skim over the training journey and the canon Ranma story until you reach where things start to differ, probably after the bombed wedding. Now, for girls, I like Kasumi a LOT, but she's the only one... and I think that if you're going to include Sailor Moon (and you should, as Nerima and Juuban are over three districts and like fifty miles away from each other), the only person I really like is Hotaru and Chibiusa... so sue me, I like her. Now, I noticed 'Betrayal, both True and False' in the prophecy... I think that Ron's should be real and Hermione's fake... I do NOT like Ron, Sam-I-Am. I just don't. That's what I'd like to see, but it's your story...