This is all brilliantly creepy, as Yugioh really is if you're paying attention, IMO. I love them all, but especially the segments with the Spirit of the Ring and with Bakura in the Shadow Realm. I always appreciate it when a writer delves into the story and explains things that needed explaining, and you've done that very well here. Thank you!
Author's response
Thanks so much for the review. :) It's great to hear that these scenes mesh with canon, because that is, after all, what they were meant to do.