Wow. That was awesome. I think you should definately make it chaptered-I can't wait to see if you do.
I only have ficwad though, so it would be cool if you could post it on here?
Seriously, it was awesome.
Mean Gerard, lol.
Hope you update.
Alice.
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Thank you alot!
like i posted it on livejournal, and got some pretty good responses. Similar to yours. so i think i'm going keep going. I'll post here and there. :]
Thank you alot!