Review for Tantalized


(#) --KIKI-- 2008-08-03

Hey, well, about your comment at the end of your story... Isn't fanfiction a way to enlargen the mind...? Is there a rule that you can't write about something that may never happen? If I were you, I'd try to write your story about Jack and Sara. It'd be a great way to see what others think of their relationship!
Either way, great story! Hope you add more soon!!