Both of you suck, pearlhime!
Hime! tch. Anyway's crappy name.
Maybe you are also a fanfic stealer. You guys have no originalities and you don't deserve to be a BLEACH fan. Nor and IchiRuki fan. If Xairylle was a member of IchiRuki FC, you guys are in deep shit and they'll go bankai on your asses!
I also write fics and anyone cares if someone steal their own work especially the fans are greatly affected by it.
Why did you say this is much better? She just copy-pasted it...
YOU GUYS SUCK! POSERS!!!