I'm loving this story more and more, and the characterizations are spot on, but i thought that the title is a bit stand offish in that it tells those who have not read it a stereotype o sex and underage immorality.
While the actual story is touching and lovely.
maybe a change of title like To harry with love or something like that might be better.
dennisud
Author's response
Thank you very much!
That's an interesting suggestion about the title. I hadn't thought of it that way, but it mightn't be a bad idea. I'm pants at coming up with titles, but I'll put some thought into it.
Glad you like the story, and especially that you thought the characterisations were on--that's one of the things I've been a bit worried about.
Thanks again!