(#) lua 2008-08-07
Nice story, I haven't really read that much stories about Jon. And he doesn't really look like someone who would enjoy a one night stand but whatever
I also love the fact thingy and and
I like your shoes
Thanks
Can I follow you?
sounds familiar :) inspired by bright eyes maybe ?
Author's response
Inspired by bright eyes? Yes. You're a fan, I can tell by your screen name. I believe there were at least 3 other references to the song in the chapter.
I also almost use Lua as a song in a future chapter, but ended up deciding against it when I found a song that fit better. Despite how amazing Conor is, I figured I would mix it up a little.
As for Jon not being someone to enjoy a one night stand, I wouldn't say Cassia is either. In the next few chapters though, you only get Cassia point of view on the situation, you only saw Cassia reasons for acting the way she did. Later in the story though, Jon's reasoning will come out too. Hope that'll make more sense of why I made the decision I did for the story.