Okay, before I read the 5th chapter cause I have been trying to review before but internet gave me shit. I love this story. It's comical and it was JWALK in it who is too delicious. lol. You're a great writer.
Jon Walker is too cool. We need more stories of him, so thanks for writing one.
Okay, I'm going to read the next chapter. After that one, please update soon.
Author's response
Thank you for taking the time to review, especially with your internet giving you trouble! I know what a pain ficwad can be sometimes.
I'm really glad you like the story, it's probably one of my favorites I've written (especially recently, I've been kind of in a slump with everything else I've started).
The next chapter I have to post (chapter 6) is the first one I wrote for this story. If that makes sense. Basically I got the idea and wrote it and then used five chapters to figure out how to get to that point. I'm really excited for everyone to read it.