Review for First Date

First Date

(#) your_michelle 2008-08-10

First off, I must start by bringing attention to a blatantly false statement: "Izzy and Slash have their first date. Short, fluffy thing that could spawn a couple more chapters"
Who the hell calls 30 more chapters a couple! LOL! Let me assure you, this is not a complaint, rather something I found amusing.

Now, on with the review!

Poor twisted Axl doesn't understand what he's done wrong and is now a wreck of a person which makes me sad cause it's hard to see him as the villian when his side of the story is being told, so good job there for rounding out the story and showing both sides.

Now, poor dopesick Slash seems to have no idea that his poor brave Izzy has to sacrifice his loyalty to make him better, which makes me sad because if he was in a better state he definately would have talked Izzy out of selling himself.

Finally, poor courageous Izzy who steps in to be the hero knowing full well that he is not going to like himself very much once he has done what he has to do to get the money to make Slash feel better, made me happy in a dreadful way because he is proving just how much he loves Slash.

So, to sum this one up, it is a complex, angsty little bit that will make anyone with a heart feel sad for the boys, espically Izzy who has to betray Slash in order to help him. And, I love it. :) More soon???

Author's response

First off, I must start by bringing attention to a blatantly false statement: "Izzy and Slash have their first date. Short, fluffy thing that could spawn a couple more chapters"

Yes, yes, trading standards would have a field day with me over that! ;P

I'm glad you're still managing to keep up! To tell you the truth, as hard as it seems for Izzy to be going out onto the streets, damn, I'm looking forward to writing hooker Izzy again. Only this time, it'll be darker, not so funny hooker Izzy... Keep up - there's gonna be more!