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The Clown.
The Clown.
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plainwhitetank
2008-08-11
i like this! my only constructive criticism: maybe the first bit should be less punctuated so when you get to the bit,
"the anger. the rage."
the punchiness becomes more emphasised. just a thought.
keep it up!
-E