Review for Sleep
Aw oh my lord. That was so tragic, I'm crying. Really, really well written. I loved how you described Frank, 'perfect', because that's what he is. Also, how you said his voice was childish and innocent was spot on, it really is. It just makes him all the more adorable. How could anyone possibly hate him? (unless your cold and heartless like Marilyn Manson!)
I loved it! You should do more one-shots. Their really great.
Alice.
Author's response
Thankies! < 3 muchas love.
Um, anyway...hahahaha, I adore Marilyn Manson. True, he's an asshole. And a freak. And he was a total bastard to Frankiekins. But he's still cool. He's just a staple, I guess. I'm mad at him for being so rude to Frank though.
I like writing oneshots, but ideas are hard to come up with, so...I dunno, we'll see.