Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-14

Yay!!! We can review!!

I loved it and can start to see the chemistry between Bob and Jill. I love Frankie taking the roll of the matchmaker.

I always get excitd when I see an update.

Looking forward to more!!

Author's response

Thank you so much.
I messed up a few times in that chapter - spelling and i repeated myself a few times so i'm sorry about that.