AWWWH.
I love the fact that you made Frank really sweet and funny. And like a five year old. =P
Ohhh and sexay time. Bob is getting confidence and like hitting on Jill.
Its hot.
I love it.
PLEASE UPDATE.
Author's response
Thank you so much and i'm so pleased you are enjoying the story.
I can't help but write Frank like that, i just picture him to be a really friendly and trusting guy with a heart of gold.
I see Bob as being really private and not giving too much of himself away. There's loads of drama to come :)
I will try to update asap