hmmm....
I liked it very much.
kinda showed hoe Pete isn't as wonderful as people make him seem lol j/k...well I'm gonna continue to read it now...
Author's response
Haha, wow, I can't believe I'm still getting comments on this story.
Honestly, this is my least favorite story that I've written. It was actually the first one I've posted on FicWad, and it needs A LOT of improvement. It's a little immature, but since this was my first story, I guess it won't be my best.
Actually, I think I've come a long way as a writer. In other stories, my characters seem more mature and realistic, my descriptions flow better, and the plots actually make sense. Haha.
Okay, I'm just rambling, I think I'll give you a more coherent response now. :D
Yes, I tend to make reader's favorite characters the antagonist. I really don't know why. I just do. Although, I love Pete. He's amazing. [Well, the real one that is.] xD
Thank you for the review!