Omfg that was fucking hilarious.
Seriously, I wasn't expecting that but when I read that was in his pubes I cracked up!
I like it.
It would be great if you continued but I also think it would be great if it's left alone as a one-shot. So, whichever way you go it's still awesone lol.
I think i'll leave it as a one shot
i haven't got much time atm, just got a new puppy ^_^
but you should read my javey fic, coin operated boy. (:
thanks for the review! cookie