(#) BenRG 2008-08-19
A nice little addition to the story. I particularly liked that terrifying Ravenclaw forethought that Padma showed. If I were Harry, I'd be very, very afraid of what two intelligent, motivated witches might get up to over the next few years. :-p
So, it is confirmed that Tom is with someone. The reply to his prodding about 'soul mates' suggests that this is not Ginny; she would have rejoiced at the thought of being Harry's soul mate. I'm going to stick with Tom's host being Luna but it is just as possible that it is either an OC or someone who was just a name in canon.
Once again, good characterisations that manage to reflect the characters age and level of emotional development at that age. Well done.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
Just one PS: The surname of the Poweer Pack kids is 'Power', not 'Powers'. I think that you got Jack's relationship with his siblings just right although he is more likely to tease young Katie than older sister Julie.
Author's response
- I don't know how Ravenclaw it is really, I over heard my daughter and her friends making similar plans for young male friends at that age...
- Not Ginny? Perish the thought.
- Yeah, I goof up the Power/Powers thing all the time. Working on it.