Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) moonpig 2008-08-19

I love this story. I totally agree with the above comments, the conversation is so funny especially between Frank and Gerard.

I also really like all the other threads in the story like Ruth and Justin, jill's personal history, frank trying to get them together and mikey's problems.

So good Neve - have a nice holiday

Author's response

Look the chapter turned green - OMG i am so happy. This had made my day.

Thanks moonpig once again for leaving such a nice review. I;ve got such a boast from everyone. You should see some of the things i've written - Jill on the tour bus - he he.

Thank you for saying you liked the sub plots too. I might be taking on too much but it all links together eventually.