I've been lurking this story for awhile, sorry. I think it's great though. It's cute, and sensitive, and all that good stuff. My eyes welled up by the end of this chapter because I know exactly how Bob feels and I loved how you described that feeling. Awesome job. Awesome story.
Right more ASAP.
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Cryssie
P.S. Yeah, what Sassy said, Metallica! No competition. Although it's an opinion.