I want to just grab Bob and shake him damn it.
I agree with lacerationgravity, i love the gradual pace of this story as it makes it more believable.
You write Frank so funny, i just laugh out loud and i can imagine him saying some of things you write.
Hope you have a great holiday,
Author's response
ha ha, thank you once again.
I had a brilliant holiday and have come back with loads of ideas. I hope to post later today.