Review for Summer 4th year Revised

Summer 4th year Revised

(#) dennisud 2008-08-30

Somehow your story was on the updated pages then gone! But I got the FicWad alert and got the story. Hope you update your stories and particularly this one soon. I can't wait to see how 5th year goes with themalready Bonding!

Again lovely use of Luna, use her more here!


Author's response

The problem with the update page was my error. I attempted to upload the entire story as a one shot and thought it had worked until a reviewer pointed out the story seemed to just stop. Checking it I found the second half was missing so I took it down and reposted it as a three parter.

My apologizes