Review for Summer 4th year Revised

Summer 4th year Revised

(#) dennisud 2008-08-30

Somehow your story was on the updated pages then gone! But I got the FicWad alert and got the story. Hope you update your stories and particularly this one soon. I can't wait to see how 5th year goes with themalready Bonding!

Again lovely use of Luna, use her more here!

dennosid

Author's response

The problem with the update page was my error. I attempted to upload the entire story as a one shot and thought it had worked until a reviewer pointed out the story seemed to just stop. Checking it I found the second half was missing so I took it down and reposted it as a three parter.

My apologizes
Scruffy1