A very oringinal beginning. I haven't read a new harry/bella story in a long time. Just make the chapters a bit longer and you would be doing great
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Thanks :)
If I make the chapters longer, you'll have to wait longer for them. I'm aiming for 3,000 word chapters posted every weekend, and hopefully i'll be able to keep at it, but I have a really busy week ahead of me, so don't get your hopes up.
Chris