Well, most definitely an enjoyable story and you handled all the characters nicely. I do hope you'll do a sequel follwoing them through the school year after this.
BTW, I did find one glaring typo here, "...judges willowed down..." should be "...judges winnowed down..."
Author's response
Thanks to you and jump_jives.
As I said on my other story although I use American English every day. I do appreciate it when someone points out my errors. Some are due to fingers typing too fast while others are simply ignorance or my disagreement with MS Word's spell/grammar checker.
Thanks to you and jump_jives.
As I said on my other story although I use American English every day, I do appreciate it when someone points out my errors. Some are due to fingers typing too fast while others are simply ignorance or my disagreement with MS Word's spell/grammar checker.