Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-09-01

Hi Dondon,

Wow very intense. I love that he took her to his grandmother's graveyeard very creative.

I can't wait to see what happens now that they're all going to go!!

Author's response

I wanted him to be somewhere scary and alone so I thought of a graveyard. Then the grandomther idea just popped into my head.

Thanks for the review :)