hey sugar stars, I was just wondering something (completey ransom I know but). Did you get inspiration for this story from Madonna's video for Frozen? Cuz I have it and I was watching it, and the first thing that popped into my mind was this story, especially the part where she sucks up the shadowy thing. So yeah....completely random. And Denby is right, you should write a book, you definitely have the potential and the talent for it. This story never disappoints, it always has fresh new turns, suspense, humour, everything a person could want. And your style and tone is quite enjoyable, easy to read and easy to get caught up in. You definitely draw the reader in and keep them in. I know I feel a little lost once I'm done reading a chapter, because all of a sudden I'm cut off and I still want more. I love that, and I love this story. I think, if you were at all interested, you should definitely think about writing a novel. I am, and you're a much better writer than me. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesomely awesome work!!
Author's response
hm, actually I've never seen that video.