Yeah that was pretty much amazing. I just read your whole story up to chapter 8 and I almost cried when I found out that was all that was posted. Not realy but it was a pretty intense moment. There are only two things I have trouble with in your story; 1) connencting names and people but after 8 chapters I pretty well got the hang of it so no worries and 2) language. profanity may not be a big deal to me but I definately can't let the parentals see if u know what I mean. So that's all for now. Update soon...like yesterday. Waiting sucks lol. Happy writing :)