Review for Thoughts of Pudding

Thoughts of Pudding

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-09-14

Very interesting update. It was a bit awkward the way Hermione and Luna handed out Harry's assignment as if he wasn't even there. Seemed a bit patronizing to me, even if they were proud.

I also couldn't help but groan at the inevitable will readings. If you're trying to write a remotely realistic story, they're completely necessary...but I've read so many of them now...

Looking forward to more.