FicWad

Right. Sorry.

I didn't mean to offend you; my head just got away from me, as it is wont to do. So I apologize.

Forgive me?

It was not my intention to suggest that you change your story, as you seem to have believed, so I suppose I am at fault there for not specifying that. I merely wished to give you an example of what I was trying to communicate. But nevermind.

And reading over Moonshyne's comment, I'm inclined to agree that the example I gave lost the emotion of the moment.

So in summary, I beg your pardon for irritating you. (I would also suggest that you find a beta, but I'm certain that the suggestion would be met with cold refusal.)

So sorry.