I first wish to say you are an exelent and imaginative writer.
2nd I woulsd like to ask if you have taken over the story A different way of looking at thing or if this is just a spin off??
Author's response
Oh thank you
This is honestly the first longer thing I have ever writtenin english. It's fun.
And this is and stays a spin-off. It started origially as 'suggestion' chapter, since I didn't and don't want his story to stop.I had a chat with the author of the original story. He said that he wanted to do something like the first scene with Luna. I wrote the first chapter and told him to take whatever he wanted from it. I didn't stop there and wrote the first 15 chapters in maybe three days. It became a spin-off when I decided to post it and got his ok to do so.
All for the common cause of promoting D/s stories.
Since we have different preferencces and experiences I am sure he will take his story in a different direction. And he does.
As far as I know he is a little occupied with his RL ...in a rather exciting way. But he intends to continue his story soon.
I hope the concept of a spin-off is not too confusing, but I think the stories are different enough already that it will not be a big problem and people can enjoy both stories.