1. Love this story.
2. You have nothing to be worried about. great as always. Don't stress, anything you write we will willingly read.
3. I loved how you had that little part where you had Jill studying Mikey's actions and relating it to the whole depression thing. I like it when Jill observes them.
4. Cannot wait for the road trip and Jill's Dad!!! It is going to be awesome.
please update soon. I cannot get enough of this story.
Author's response
Thanks for reviewing :)
I love writing the guys and Mikey is just too interesting to ignore :)
I think Jill's Dad is a bit nutty so hopefully i can get some humourous bits going on with him.
I promise to post soon :)