I like this story. I see it has been a while since you posted, but I hope you have more of this story left to tell. PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS.
Author's response
Hey! I'm glad you like this story, it's my fave of the two. They've both been adopted by Starbucksmocha over on fanfiction.net (I've read her stuff, and they're in good hands, I promise). She's trying to write out at least a quarter of each story before she posts them, and I for one am looking forward to seeing what she does with them. That's pretty much the scope of my involvement in fanfic these days.