Review for Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Take Two

Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Take Two

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-09-19

Good work breaking up that kiss. It'd be a bit strange if their first kiss involved Harry looking like a Weasley.

I really enjoyed this update, but my one piece of criticism is something I can't help but offer to a lot of authors: Do you really have to use the nickname 'Mione? It's never mentioned in canon, and it sounds incredibly awkward when said aloud.

Looking forward to more.