(#) Vanir 2008-09-28
Very well done. I love to have an elevated pulse at the end of a chapter, and you tend to deliver. It's also nice to see that charming Swedish official:-).
I enjoyed the cousin banter, and i have a feeling we haven't heard the last of "Three", and i truly adored the Great Smackdown of the Interfering Old Coot.
Hmm. Could Harry use his Head-ship to call Tonks names without retaliation? Oh, and please let Harry see the girls cuddle. Just to open his mind, by dynamite. Give him some troubling dreams and such. Tonks could also use some seriously poor judgement in choosing shapes for bathing. Just some ideas.
Thanks.
Vanir