Finally.
Something decent on these here parts of FicWad.
I've got to tell you, I've been searching for something as well-written as this. I just get tired of all the illiterate newbs, yanno?
Alas, I'm so very happy that I found this! It was perfect. (Maybe a little short, but don't listen to me on that. I'm just picky.)
Anyway, I love the mystery behind the boy with the anguished expression. (I assume it's Ryan, yes?) And how Brendon wanted to capture the moment of it. That if one second passes by, it might be gone. Seeing as Brendon is a photographer, he probably feels this way about all his subjects. :D
Seriously, I loved this and I sincerely hope you update soon. I cannot wait until the second chapter. :D
Author's response
Yes, it's Ryro. And, yes, it's photographer!Brendon at work. And an update is in the works, so fear not.
Thanks for the beautiful review; it means a lot that you put so much time into doing that.