I agree with practically everything alice93 has said. JohnJohnJohn fucking John!!
If John is so perfectly amazing why doesnt he have a girlfriend?!?!?!?!?!
Leave Maddie alone she is Bob's!!
And Maddie, silly girl, your not over Bob. You cant fool us!
Yeah I like Laurhen in this chapter.
Great update, but as usual i need more =D
dondon xo.
Author's response
Hi there Dondon,
Okay I get you guys hate John. I'm sorry but Maddie likes him and he likes her. Bob really hurt her and John was there to help pick up the pieces.
John doesn't have a girlfriend at the moment because he's looking for the right one. Has he finally found her? We'll find out.
By the way Maddie is Maddie's and the way Bob has treated her he doesn't deserve her.
But we'll find out soon enough if she's over Bob.
Laurhen is pretty cool, especially in the next chapter or two something major is going to happen.
As usual thank you so much for the review!!!