Ok.
Whoa.
I really wasn't expecting what Brendon did (despite the little hint the title gave.)
I swear I was holding my breath and staring at my phone (Thank Metro for it's internet) till my eyes watered and I felt light-headed.
I know for a fact that if I decided to read two of your stories last night (when I really read it) and it gave as much a shock as that one did, I would've keeled over from a heart attack and would'nt be able to review. You are a kick ass writer.
Hope you have intentions of writing more.
:)