Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) easykeys 2008-10-04

hey its me Dondon1827, long story short this is my new account


Loved this soooo much!!

"her mind was getting filthier by the minute"- that it is hahaha!

This made me laugh so bad-

"I'm coming goddamit," Bob replied as he kissed Jill on the forehead.

"Ewwwwwww, do you have to give us the graphic details?" Frank yelled back.

Utter genius !

This chapter was kinda sad too, Jill is leaving soon =(

Amazing as always and cant wait for more

dondon xo.

Author's response

Hi Dondon

I always have issues posting with ficwad, it can be a nightmare.

I made you laugh - hurrah
You liked the Frank reaction to Bob, i just figured he would be the one to respond like that. Poor Jill having to deal with the filthy minds, there's no escape.

Jill is leaving soon but i don't want to give anything away. Drama drama.