Ouch.
I can feel Alyssa's pain, Gerard's anger, everything.
Very well written but please do make the chapters longer.
Carry on..
Author's response
Hi there,
Thank you so much for the review.
I'm so happy that you can feel all those emotions from the characters.
I'll try to make the chapters longer as we start to get into the meat of the story.
Thanks so much for the review!!