Aaaah thanks so much for updating!
the way you write Bob and Jill together is so lovely. and he called her Jilly! so sweet.
and i love how you portray Gerard. sleepy Gerard is too lovely! i was giggling at the Iron Maidon record part! Jill falling for the Gerard manipulation and your description of him like a "flapping bird!" i could actually picture it!
thanks so much and keep up the good work!
oh and i love Muse also!
Author's response
Thank you so much, i couldn't resist putting a sleepy Gerard in there so i'm glad you liked the image of him being like that. I love writing Ray too i guess he's a straight to the point kind of guy and there's a pissed off Ray in my next update.