Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) linerlover 2008-10-09

thats sooo sweet!

i really love the way you wrote gerard and ray arguing over the record... and the last line sounds exactly like me and my friends.

more soon? =]

Author's response

Thank you, i wrote the Gerard and Ray bit a while ago and i'm so pleased it worked in the story. I know Gerard's the older one but i can imagine him and Frank being dumb every now and again.