Great story.
Dumbledore needs to goto Azkaban for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as the Dudleys to goto Azkaban for what they did to Harry.
Where are Dobby & Winky?
Harry needs to get help from Her Royal Majesty Queen of Britain, Canada, Australia, New Zealand, Jamaica, Barbados, the Bahamas, Grenada, Papua New Guinea, the Solomon Islands, Tuvalu, Saint Lucia, Saint Vincent and the Grenadines, Antigua and Barbuda, Belize and Saint Kitts and Nevis, The Duchess of Edinburgh, Princess Elizabeth and Princess Elizabeth of York, Elizabeth II to kill Voldemort & his Death Eaters.
Harry & Hermione need to stay out of England untill Harry is ready to kill Voldemort & the rest of the Death Eathers.