That was a very nice chapter. I just began reading this story this week and in one night caught up with everything. Its sad really because I had been planning to wait until the story was finished, but I decided to take a peak after some comments on one of the mailing lists and found I couldn't really 'put it down.' Now I am going to have to wait patiently from chapter to chapter (which is why I had been avoiding starting the story).
As for the story itself, you are doing a very nice job of moving it the along at a slow enough pace that the relationships don't seem to come from nowhere. Additionally, it is well written with a lot of humor. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Author's response
Hi Jump Jives, and welcome to the story.
I can feel where you are coming from with wanting to wait for a story to be complete before starting it.. I used to do exactly the same thing - with the same outcome.
I appreciate the feedback, but I'm curious about which mailing list you've been reading. As far as I know, none of the lists I'm on have been discussing the story in the last week. I'd like to join in whichever one it is.
Cheers,
Brian