uhhh... this story is just gut wrenching! you definitely have a knack for writing to bring out emotion in the reader. i just hate jade and rick! they deserve each other, bleh. gerard needs to find someone who really cares about him and the kid =) keep going, yes?
Author's response
Wow thank you so much!
This review has made my day! I think I may write another chapter now and post it =D
Jade and Rick are really mean and Gee deserves way better, so does Charli.
Thanks so much for your review! I will update soon
dondon xo.